still waiting on replys

Interesting design page,  No problem seeing you offer personal and corporate protection.  Having said that, your page would be more professional if you corrected the miss-spellings.

Nice concept for a page. I'm sure its still a work in progress. A few things that come to mind. First and foremost, as the other guys said, on a professional site, spelling is utterly important. Second, some of the pictures are fuzzy, and the patch picture looks like it was maybe photoshoped. I would clean up some of the images or take/upload some new ones. Finally, you should really expound on the "About me" section. You briefly mention experience, but more details would probably be important...prior job experience, related fields, training, etc. If I were looking for security/protective services, I would need to hire someone I could come to trust, which would imply knowing more about you.

Just my 2cents.

ok guys made a few changes. now what do you think?

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Got to correct those spelling errors. Up most not utmost and Community not Cummunity are the ones I noticed. Looks good so far though

LOOKING GOOD SO FAR!

No problem, you made me doubt myself so I looked it up

ummmmmmmm....No jlu

scorpio11 says ...

ok guys which is it ut most or up most?

No you got it right "ut most"

bill9823 says ...

it is utmost not ut most

one word

swatj10 says ...

I am a Security Officer and I think the Tactical Protection Services (T.P.S.) is a really sweet idea. What type of clintele would you be protecting

well i plan on serving everyone. i have a list of service on my web page. i just want to get away from the traditional security look and into more of a military look and setting.

i plan on starting in high crime apartment complexes with the tactical gear, and working on a class a uniform for more of a professional setting.

tactical has a more of down to buisness feel, and is cheaper to supply the men. i want everyone looking the same, that wont happen unless i issue items.

Wow you call this a site, looks like a MRDD Asian boy did this or you just did not do well in school, you know that they do have adult education and night school for those that would like to learn how to spell and write.  Wow this is sorry, if I would want to hire a security company for my complex I would want the people working for me to know how to read and write and spell, how am I do read your reports if you can not spell. And what if your reports had to go to court?  The judge would laugh at you! How sad in deed this is.  If you really want a to have a good site please hire someone that can make you look good. 

This makes you look like the typical redneck security guard.

If i wanted a real compay i would call Black Water or White Stone Group