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www.a1tacticalprotectionservices.com


this is my new web page. any suggestions?

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still waiting on replys


 

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nice page, I have a son in marketing and another in web design and service , I could ask them. My only question is who are you targeting? I might put some things on the site that targets a certain demographic, whom are you trying to sell to? Also, I dont know much about it, but a lot of site attractiveness involves how many other sites are linked to yours and how many hits you get. So, linkage to toher sites is important and how easy does it come  up on a google search for lets say personal protection? etc etc

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Interesting design page,  No problem seeing you offer personal and corporate protection.  Having said that, your page would be more professional if you corrected the miss-spellings.

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I have to agree with Denny_Crane, you have way to many words spelled wrong. The one word is utmost not up most. The site looks okay but you do need to work it some. One other thing you might consider is type all of your stuff in Word and do a spell check.


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Nice concept for a page. I'm sure its still a work in progress. A few things that come to mind. First and foremost, as the other guys said, on a professional site, spelling is utterly important. Second, some of the pictures are fuzzy, and the patch picture looks like it was maybe photoshoped. I would clean up some of the images or take/upload some new ones. Finally, you should really expound on the "About me" section. You briefly mention experience, but more details would probably be important...prior job experience, related fields, training, etc. If I were looking for security/protective services, I would need to hire someone I could come to trust, which would imply knowing more about you.


 


Just my 2cents.


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thanks guys for replys, still working on it

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ok guys made a few changes. now what do you think?

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im still wondering who your targeting and how do people find your website.?if you do a search for protections servcies, does your site come up?

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Got to correct those spelling errors. Up most not utmost and Community not Cummunity are the ones I noticed. Looks good so far though


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ut⋅most

<a href="http://dictionary.reference.com/audio.html/lunaWAV/U01/U0179600&quot; target="_blank"><img src="http://cache.lexico.com/g/d/speaker.gif" border="0" /></a>/ˈʌtˌmoʊst or, especially Brit., -məst/ Show Spelled Pronunciation [uht-mohst or, especially Brit., -muhst] Show IPA Pronunciation
–adjective



1.
of the greatest or highest degree, quantity, or the like; greatest: of the utmost importance.



2.

being at the farthest point or extremity; farthest: the utmost reef of the island.




 


 


Upmost


Up"most`\, a. [Cf.


Uppermost

.] Highest; topmost; uppermost. --Spenser. Dryden.


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LOOKING GOOD SO FAR!

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ut⋅most


<a href="http://dictionary.reference.com/audio.html/lunaWAV/U01/U0179600"; target="_blank"><img src="http://cache.lexico.com/g/d/speaker.gif" border="0" /></a>/ˈʌtˌmoʊst or, especially Brit., -məst/ Show Spelled Pronunciation [uht-mohst or, especially Brit., -muhst] Show IPA Pronunciation
–adjective 1. of the greatest or highest degree, quantity, or the like; greatest: of the utmost importance. 2.

being at the farthest point or extremity; farthest: the utmost reef of the island.


 


 


Upmost


Up"most`\, a. [Cf.


Uppermost

.] Highest; topmost; uppermost. --Spenser. Dryden.



I stand corrected. Thanx for the definition there it helped


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No problem, you made me doubt myself so I looked it up


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Is that going to be one of our daily words, Bill?


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ummmmmmmm....No jlu


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ok guys which is it ut most or up most?

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ok guys which is it ut most or up most?



No you got it right "ut most"


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it is utmost not ut most


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it is utmost not ut most



one word


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I am a Security Officer and I think the Tactical Protection Services (T.P.S.) is a really sweet idea. What type of clintele would you be protecting

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I am a Security Officer and I think the Tactical Protection Services (T.P.S.) is a really sweet idea. What type of clintele would you be protecting



well i plan on serving everyone. i have a list of service on my web page. i just want to get away from the traditional security look and into more of a military look and setting.


i plan on starting in high crime apartment complexes with the tactical gear, and working on a class a uniform for more of a professional setting.


tactical has a more of down to buisness feel, and is cheaper to supply the men. i want everyone looking the same, that wont happen unless i issue items.

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Wow you call this a site, looks like a MRDD Asian boy did this or you just did not do well in school, you know that they do have adult education and night school for those that would like to learn how to spell and write.  Wow this is sorry, if I would want to hire a security company for my complex I would want the people working for me to know how to read and write and spell, how am I do read your reports if you can not spell. And what if your reports had to go to court?  The judge would laugh at you! How sad in deed this is.  If you really want a to have a good site please hire someone that can make you look good. 


This makes you look like the typical redneck security guard.


If i wanted a real compay i would call Black Water or White Stone Group

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